Introducing new 'video analysis' of client writing—exclusively for paying subscribers

Dear paying subscribers,

Since working at Write of Passage I’ve been coaching writers, and one thing I've learned is that watching how someone else's writing gets analysed teaches you almost as much as getting feedback on your own work.

That's why I'm excited to share something new with you.

Starting this month, I'm sharing monthly video analyses where you can watch me give real strategic and tactical feedback to my clients (with their permission).

These are 10-30 minute deep dives into real writing challenges, complete with practical takeaways you can apply to your own work.

For example…

Here are 10 things you'll learn from this inaugural video

Key insights that you might find helpful as a writer:

1. Write with vulnerability and honesty about your fears, frustrations, and disappointments to build credibility with readers.

2. Ask good questions rather than giving all the answers to make your writing more engaging and relatable.

3. Personal stories with vulnerability give readers permission to explore th…